I WANNA TRY A HAIKUUU!! This is mine: A RED ROSE SO RED WILTING AWAY LIKE A TEAR ON A WINTER DAY Is that RIGHT?????????????? It took me awhile LOL!!!!!!!!!!
Dogo wrote: Con paciencia y saliva un elefante se cogio una hormiga En Argentina No enseñan a contar? Pinche Boludo!!!! If I could just get the damn season or element in....I'd be a great Haiku writer! -- Edited by Bainaman at 15:58, 2006-01-11
Con paciencia
y spit, un elefante
se cogio un ant
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Does that look better
Tight Ass, maraca shaking
Sweet balled, Asshole!?
-- Edited by Dogo at 17:51, 2006-01-11
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Miel wrote: @Daeveed ,. Sorry I wasn't especific,. estaba hablando del arte de la poesia japonesa de la cual mencionas,.. (ya que en uno de esos ads hablan sobre Hiku) no de los poemas que escribiste,. me entendieron mal,.. and I m one of ur poetry fans,. I like how u write,. @Bainaman,. Daeveed es original,.. well ,.. unico en su clase,.. I actually understood what you meant Miel.... I was also making reference to the thread.....not the post.... It's cool Daeveed......We know you don't plagiarize........ You just steal ideas!!! I'M KIDDING!!!! RELAX!!!!!!!
Hey!! Stealing ideas from one place is plagiarism!!!!
Stealing from a lot of places is RESEARCH!!!!
@Miel, no worries girl. I understood it wrong. apparently I can write, but I can't read.
@Daeveed ,. Sorry I wasn't especific,. estaba hablando del arte de la poesia japonesa de la cual mencionas,.. (ya que en uno de esos ads hablan sobre Hiku) no de los poemas que escribiste,. me entendieron mal,.. and I m one of ur poetry fans,. I like how u write,. @Bainaman,. Daeveed es original,.. well ,.. unico en su clase,..
I actually understood what you meant Miel....
I was also making reference to the thread.....not the post....
It's cool Daeveed......We know you don't plagiarize........
You just steal ideas!!!
I'M KIDDING!!!! RELAX!!!!!!!
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@Daeveed ,. Sorry I wasn't especific,. estaba hablando del arte de la poesia japonesa de la cual mencionas,.. (ya que en uno de esos ads hablan sobre Hiku) no de los poemas que escribiste,. me entendieron mal,.. and I m one of ur poetry fans,. I like how u write,.
@Bainaman,. Daeveed es original,.. well ,.. unico en su clase,..
I think u and I ride the Rocket,.. This was one of the posters of poems on the go,. or something like that in the subway,. good,. i thought i was the only one reading those ads,..
Hey, cuidado con lo que dices. I take the TTC, AND I read those poetry ads. But you are mistaken. the first one I wrote it long time ago, and it's on my Writings webpage. The other I just made it up.
Please don't say things like that if you're not 100% sure.
I think u and I ride the Rocket,.. This was one of the posters of poems on the go,. or something like that in the subway,. good,. i thought i was the only one reading those ads,..
And I thought Daeveed was original....
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"Most of us fall short much more by omission than by commission."
OK guys, let's play to be poets and learn from it. This is a type of Japanese poetry called HAIKU, and it is a very short poem that follows a set of rules. Haiku is one of the most important modes of Japanese poetry, a late 19th century revision by Masaoka Shiki of the older hokku (発句), the opening verse of a linked verse form, haikai no renga . A traditional hokku consists of a pattern of approximately 5, 7, and 5 morae, phonetic units which only partially correspond to the syllables of languages such as English. It also contains a special season word (the kigo) descriptive of the season in which it is set. Hokku often combine two (or rarely, three) different elements into a unified sensory impression, with a major grammatical break (kire) at the end of either the first five or second seven morae. These rules are considered essential to haiku as well, though often broken by modern writers of "free-form haiku" and of non-Japanese haiku. A Haiku is a 3-line poem, where the first and third line have 5 syllables, while the second has 7. It must include a season word (i.e. snow for winter, or flowers for spring), and combine at lease 2 elements. Here is my first attempt, try to write a Haiku yourselves!!! Sobre la nieve un pajaro cantaba. Ahora calla. another, Her tears collided with the ugly reflections of the mid-day sun Now you go.
I think u and I ride the Rocket,.. This was one of the posters of poems on the go,. or something like that in the subway,. good,. i thought i was the only one reading those ads,..
angelita dulce wrote: Bainaman wrote: Dogo KE paso? The winter has you f@cked up? Estas PENDEJO!!!! A BILINGUAL ONE!!! Woo Hoo!!! With the season... ESTE INVIERNO BAINAMAN LE GUSTA A DOGO POR PENDEJO * hey Daeveed, how am i doin'?? U used too many syllables in your last morea......but you're not doing bad.....not as bad as Dogo! LOL Try to not use the actual season (I was doing that before too).....but more something pertaining to the description of one.....gives you more options... But i'm no expert......I'm learning too.....
LMAO!! You are giving me tips onthis! LOL!! U're too funny! THANKS!!!
And yes i know, but i was trying!!! But not that bad, wasn't it!!
Bainaman wrote: Dogo KE paso? The winter has you f@cked up? Estas PENDEJO!!!! A BILINGUAL ONE!!! Woo Hoo!!! With the season... ESTE INVIERNO BAINAMAN LE GUSTA A DOGO POR PENDEJO * hey Daeveed, how am i doin'??
U used too many syllables in your last morea......but you're not doing bad.....not as bad as Dogo! LOL
Try to not use the actual season (I was doing that before too).....but more something pertaining to the description of one.....gives you more options...
But i'm no expert......I'm learning too.....
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"Most of us fall short much more by omission than by commission."
OK guys, let's play to be poets and learn from it.
This is a type of Japanese poetry called HAIKU, and it is a very short poem that follows a set of rules.
Haiku is one of the most important modes of Japanese poetry, a late 19th century revision by Masaoka Shiki of the older hokku (発句), the opening verse of a linked verse form, haikai no renga . A traditional hokku consists of a pattern of approximately 5, 7, and 5 morae, phonetic units which only partially correspond to the syllables of languages such as English. It also contains a special season word (the kigo) descriptive of the season in which it is set. Hokku often combine two (or rarely, three) different elements into a unified sensory impression, with a major grammatical break (kire) at the end of either the first five or second seven morae. These rules are considered essential to haiku as well, though often broken by modern writers of "free-form haiku" and of non-Japanese haiku.
A Haiku is a 3-line poem, where the first and third line have 5 syllables, while the second has 7. It must include a season word (i.e. snow for winter, or flowers for spring), and combine at lease 2 elements.
Here is my first attempt, try to write a Haiku yourselves!!!