Let's play poet

LaDyBuG · Comandante

RE: Let's play poet

Julie · Comandante

Winterfset ending

To be toghether again

for P-Crew cheerings

Pfff, though one

Bainaman · Foro Master

Swirls of snow fly by

The wind gusts like raging bulls

In the arctic sky

@ Daeveed - Getting better I think........Picturesque......no???

DulceGalletita · Foro Master

DulceGalletita wrote:

I WANNA TRY A HAIKUUU!! This is mine: A RED ROSE SO RED WILTING AWAY LIKE A TEAR ON A WINTER DAY Is that RIGHT?????????????? It took me awhile LOL!!!!!!!!!!

LOL LB!!!

Along the lines of LB's Haiku ...

*cough* *cough*

HOY FOREANDO

MAÑANA FOREANDO

FOROHOLICOS

** Am I doing this right?? **

LaDyBuG · Comandante

WE FORO SIEMPRE

ALL WINTER, SUMMER AND FALL

BUT THIS IS SO HARD

latinsoulchild · TOP Guru

Her butt was sky high

She ran like the winter wind

No more banging deer..!

lol

Man this is tough..lol

Jaime Cruz · Foro Master

The sensation was hot,

The smell was of burnt,

My hand was stuck on the stove

TV Buff · TOP Guru

La la la la la

la la la la la summer

La la la la la

Close and cigar?

DulceGalletita · Foro Master

I WANNA TRY A HAIKUUU!!

This is mine:

A RED ROSE SO RED

WILTING AWAY LIKE A TEAR

ON A WINTER DAY

Is that RIGHT??????????????

It took me awhile LOL!!!!!!!!!!

Dogo · Comandante

Bainaman wrote:

Dogo wrote: Con paciencia y saliva un elefante se cogio una hormiga En Argentina No enseñan a contar? Pinche Boludo!!!! If I could just get the damn season or element in....I'd be a great Haiku writer! -- Edited by Bainaman at 15:58, 2006-01-11

Con paciencia

y spit, un elefante

se cogio un ant

__________

Does that look better

Tight Ass, maraca shaking

Sweet balled, Asshole!?

-- Edited by Dogo at 17:51, 2006-01-11

Daeveed · Foro Master

Bainaman wrote:

Miel wrote: @Daeveed ,. Sorry I wasn't especific,. estaba hablando del arte de la poesia japonesa de la cual mencionas,.. (ya que en uno de esos ads hablan sobre Hiku) no de los poemas que escribiste,. me entendieron mal,.. and I m one of ur poetry fans,. I like how u write,. @Bainaman,. Daeveed es original,.. well ,.. unico en su clase,.. I actually understood what you meant Miel.... I was also making reference to the thread.....not the post.... It's cool Daeveed......We know you don't plagiarize........ You just steal ideas!!! I'M KIDDING!!!! RELAX!!!!!!!

Hey!! Stealing ideas from one place is plagiarism!!!!

Stealing from a lot of places is RESEARCH!!!!

@Miel, no worries girl. I understood it wrong. apparently I can write, but I can't read.

Bainaman · Foro Master

Miel wrote:

@Daeveed ,. Sorry I wasn't especific,. estaba hablando del arte de la poesia japonesa de la cual mencionas,.. (ya que en uno de esos ads hablan sobre Hiku) no de los poemas que escribiste,. me entendieron mal,.. and I m one of ur poetry fans,. I like how u write,. @Bainaman,. Daeveed es original,.. well ,.. unico en su clase,..

I actually understood what you meant Miel....

I was also making reference to the thread.....not the post....

It's cool Daeveed......We know you don't plagiarize........

You just steal ideas!!!

I'M KIDDING!!!! RELAX!!!!!!!

Miel · Guru

@Daeveed ,. Sorry I wasn't especific,. estaba hablando del arte de la poesia japonesa de la cual mencionas,.. (ya que en uno de esos ads hablan sobre Hiku) no de los poemas que escribiste,. me entendieron mal,.. and I m one of ur poetry fans,. I like how u write,.

@Bainaman,. Daeveed es original,.. well ,.. unico en su clase,..

Daeveed · Foro Master

Miel wrote:

I think u and I ride the Rocket,.. This was one of the posters of poems on the go,. or something like that in the subway,. good,. i thought i was the only one reading those ads,..

Hey, cuidado con lo que dices. I take the TTC, AND I read those poetry ads. But you are mistaken. the first one I wrote it long time ago, and it's on my Writings webpage. The other I just made it up.

Please don't say things like that if you're not 100% sure.

Bainaman · Foro Master

Miel wrote:

I think u and I ride the Rocket,.. This was one of the posters of poems on the go,. or something like that in the subway,. good,. i thought i was the only one reading those ads,..

And I thought Daeveed was original....

Miel · Guru

Daeveed wrote:

OK guys, let's play to be poets and learn from it. This is a type of Japanese poetry called HAIKU, and it is a very short poem that follows a set of rules. Haiku is one of the most important modes of Japanese poetry, a late 19th century revision by Masaoka Shiki of the older hokku (発句), the opening verse of a linked verse form, haikai no renga . A traditional hokku consists of a pattern of approximately 5, 7, and 5 morae, phonetic units which only partially correspond to the syllables of languages such as English. It also contains a special season word (the kigo) descriptive of the season in which it is set. Hokku often combine two (or rarely, three) different elements into a unified sensory impression, with a major grammatical break (kire) at the end of either the first five or second seven morae. These rules are considered essential to haiku as well, though often broken by modern writers of "free-form haiku" and of non-Japanese haiku. A Haiku is a 3-line poem, where the first and third line have 5 syllables, while the second has 7. It must include a season word (i.e. snow for winter, or flowers for spring), and combine at lease 2 elements. Here is my first attempt, try to write a Haiku yourselves!!! Sobre la nieve un pajaro cantaba. Ahora calla. another, Her tears collided with the ugly reflections of the mid-day sun Now you go.

I think u and I ride the Rocket,.. This was one of the posters of poems on the go,. or something like that in the subway,. good,. i thought i was the only one reading those ads,..

angelita dulce · Foro Master

Bainaman wrote:

angelita dulce wrote: Bainaman wrote: Dogo KE paso? The winter has you f@cked up? Estas PENDEJO!!!! A BILINGUAL ONE!!! Woo Hoo!!! With the season... ESTE INVIERNO BAINAMAN LE GUSTA A DOGO POR PENDEJO * hey Daeveed, how am i doin'?? U used too many syllables in your last morea......but you're not doing bad.....not as bad as Dogo! LOL Try to not use the actual season (I was doing that before too).....but more something pertaining to the description of one.....gives you more options... But i'm no expert......I'm learning too.....

LMAO!! You are giving me tips onthis! LOL!! U're too funny! THANKS!!!

And yes i know, but i was trying!!! But not that bad, wasn't it!!

Daeveed · Foro Master

Yeah, and the whole point of a haiku is that you're trying to portrait a scene, almost like a painting.

I'm learning too.

Bainaman · Foro Master

angelita dulce wrote:

Bainaman wrote: Dogo KE paso? The winter has you f@cked up? Estas PENDEJO!!!! A BILINGUAL ONE!!! Woo Hoo!!! With the season... ESTE INVIERNO BAINAMAN LE GUSTA A DOGO POR PENDEJO * hey Daeveed, how am i doin'??

U used too many syllables in your last morea......but you're not doing bad.....not as bad as Dogo! LOL

Try to not use the actual season (I was doing that before too).....but more something pertaining to the description of one.....gives you more options...

But i'm no expert......I'm learning too.....

angelita dulce · Foro Master

Bainaman wrote:

Dogo KE paso? The winter has you f@cked up? Estas PENDEJO!!!! A BILINGUAL ONE!!! Woo Hoo!!! With the season...

ESTE INVIERNO

BAINAMAN LE GUSTA A

DOGO POR PENDEJO

* hey Daeveed, how am i doin'??

Bainaman · Foro Master

Daeveed - You need to start a Haiku police

lol

McOSIRIS · Comandante

no te cases con una viuda y eso te lo advierto.....

porque no hay que meter la "pirula" donde la metio el muerto......

Bainaman · Foro Master

angelita dulce wrote:

BAINAMAN CAN YOU TELL US WHY DOGUITO HIDES IN THIS COLD WINTER

Poor Angelita.

Wanna play with Doguito?

It broke when it froze!

Bainaman · Foro Master

Dogo KE paso?

The winter has you f@cked up?

Estas PENDEJO!!!!

A BILINGUAL ONE!!!

Woo Hoo!!!

With the season...

angelita dulce · Foro Master

BAINAMAN CAN YOU

TELL US WHY DOGUITO HIDES

IN THIS COLD WINTER

Ok, so i used 5 syllables in 1st & 3rd line and then 7 on the 3rd line! I also used a season.

Oh and i wanted to use BAINAMAN AND DOGUITO!!!

DulceGalletita · Foro Master

Phantasma wrote:

hangiar no puede mi gata porque a ella gas'lina gusta

Un poeta reggaetonero LOL!!!

Bainaman · Foro Master

Dogo wrote:

Con paciencia y saliva un elefante se cogio una hormiga

En Argentina

No enseñan a contar?

Pinche Boludo!!!!

If I could just get the damn season or element in....I'd be a great Haiku writer!

-- Edited by Bainaman at 15:58, 2006-01-11

Phantasma · TOP Guru

hangiar no puede
mi gata porque a ella
gas'lina gusta

DulceGalletita · Foro Master

I wonder if this in the long run will turn into a BATTLE???

Dogo · Comandante

Con paciencia y saliva

un elefante

se cogio una hormiga

-- Edited by Dogo at 15:54, 2006-01-11

Bainaman · Foro Master

angelita dulce wrote:

OMG!! U guys are the worst!!! I guess i'm in the GUYS ONLY THREAD!! Excuse me, i'll be out now!!

Oh Angelita

You have no sense of humor

I pity the fool

Come on Daeveed.....Gimme props!!!

I couldn't get the season or element in there....but I think that the poem didn't have any use for them....LOL

-- Edited by Bainaman at 15:45, 2006-01-11

Bainaman · Foro Master

LGigolo wrote:

Quiero hacer po po Pero no hay papel Hasta que consiga un periodico Ahorita toy' que aprieto mi piel! Getting better?

Bro.....You need help!!!!

LOL

But keep trying

LGigolo · Comandante

Quiero hacer po po

Pero no hay papel

Hasta que consiga un periodico

Ahorita toy' que aprieto mi piel!

Getting better?

angelita dulce · Foro Master

OMG!! U guys are the worst!!! I guess i'm in the GUYS ONLY THREAD!!

Excuse me, i'll be out now!!

Bainaman · Foro Master

As the water flows

Gently down her spine it goes

drop by drop they roll

McOSIRIS · Comandante

si me amas como yo te amo, porque no nos amamos por donde meamos????

buzzlightyear680 · Guru

Si tu eres la noche i yo el dia..................mami dejame verte de rodillas

Daeveed · Foro Master

Bainaman wrote:

En el verano Me gusta como chupa Mi gran Banana Was I close Daeveed?

YES!!!

keep'em cummin'.....I mean coming.

Bainaman · Foro Master

En el verano

Me gusta como chupa

Mi gran Banana

Was I close Daeveed?

Jaime Cruz · Foro Master

I got the urge,

To take a leak,

From the 2L Pepsi

McOSIRIS · Comandante

I saw you crying

wispers in my ears

sneaky butterfly...

God · Foro Master

Phantasma wrote:

This is too much work....

I know

Lets Play MOET instead!!!!

I go first!

IM GONNA GET U SUCKA!!! I DONT PLAY!!!

LMAO

I know davead is too cmplicated

Phantasma · TOP Guru

This is too much work....

I know

Lets Play MOET instead!!!!

I go first!

IM GONNA GET U SUCKA!!! I DONT PLAY!!!

LGigolo · Comandante

HAiK – U TOO!!!

LOL

P.S>: Ducle Galletita is crossing over

God · Foro Master

Sueño de dia

viajo en tranvia

Y surro en la orilla

Daeveed · Foro Master

OK guys, let's play to be poets and learn from it.

This is a type of Japanese poetry called HAIKU, and it is a very short poem that follows a set of rules.

Haiku is one of the most important modes of Japanese poetry, a late 19th century revision by Masaoka Shiki of the older hokku (発句), the opening verse of a linked verse form, haikai no renga . A traditional hokku consists of a pattern of approximately 5, 7, and 5 morae, phonetic units which only partially correspond to the syllables of languages such as English. It also contains a special season word (the kigo) descriptive of the season in which it is set. Hokku often combine two (or rarely, three) different elements into a unified sensory impression, with a major grammatical break (kire) at the end of either the first five or second seven morae. These rules are considered essential to haiku as well, though often broken by modern writers of "free-form haiku" and of non-Japanese haiku.

A Haiku is a 3-line poem, where the first and third line have 5 syllables, while the second has 7. It must include a season word (i.e. snow for winter, or flowers for spring), and combine at lease 2 elements.

Here is my first attempt, try to write a Haiku yourselves!!!

Sobre la nieve

un pajaro cantaba.

Ahora calla.

another,

Her tears collided

with the ugly reflections

of the mid-day sun

Now you go.