The parts of the drum track fit together well overall with your contrasting sections, sparse breaks, and thematic repetition.  Suggestion would be to make more obvious the difference between your Verse 1 where you have lots of drum action and your lead into Verse 2; you have the right idea about contrasting many layers with few, but more and less respectively would give the song more punch.  

 The sound files used for the drums are a bit static; there must be either better samples, or a way to make them sound fatter.  A fatter sound would fill out the track and make it sound nice and wet and heavy, rather than dry and static.

 Otherwise, catchy beats, good overall symmetry, nice beginning.