Chale Tanga wrote: oh sh$tters... guess Im the odd man out again... I like it.. i think its got a lot of potential. If they design can be printed onto a babytee (long or short sleeve), I would rock it. Pair it with a pair of dark jeans, some gold heels and some big a$$ hoop earings... that would look hype.
You forgot to mention that you would have to get your hair did
Chale Tanga wrote: oh sh$tters... guess Im the odd man out again... I like it.. i think its got a lot of potential. If they design can be printed onto a babytee (long or short sleeve), I would rock it. Pair it with a pair of dark jeans, some gold heels and some big a$$ hoop earings... that would look hype.
oh sh$tters... guess Im the odd man out again... I like it.. i think its got a lot of potential. If they design can be printed onto a babytee (long or short sleeve), I would rock it. Pair it with a pair of dark jeans, some gold heels and some big a$$ hoop earings... that would look hype.
I normally elaborate more on my comments....but I didn't have time last night....
@ TACO....have your friend John read this if he really cares about constructive criticism on his project.....it might help him.....
1. If it's a matter of "supporting" ...sure I would buy just ONE ITEM from his "clothing line".....but then I would wonder/wander if I really wanna encourage the production such "ugly" thing....(I'm sorry but I couldn't think of a better adjective)...because he might branch out and start making hats, skirts, jeans ...whatever! ...with that same logo....
2. I'm sure he has his reasons for that specific crown logo....something sentimental, gives him royalty power feelings lol...I don't know....I don't as much have an issue with the Picture of the Crown as I do with the font and size......(Keep the crown design, maybe make it smaller, it would look better even on female clothes....EX: a bikini with a small golden crown on the side...no font necessary.....a nice Baseball cap with a small gloden crown...etc..it can still be Urban but classy......and people will pay more!
3. The font and size of the "GOLDEN CROWNS" is really what is making this shirt TACKY! ....for one, it's not an original font...so right there you are not a creative designer....that's the same font Chicanos and other Rappers use for their tattoes, graffiti...etc....it's suits some, but not all.....
4. It really shows that no time or effort was made to design this shirt....to me it looks like you copied the font, copied the crown image, made golden stickers and pasted them on a regular White Long Sleeved shirt from Walmart.....If that's all it takes to launch a "clothing line".....I guarantee that anyone on here can make a nicer design/font/logo and be more original than that....
PERFECT EXAMPLE: The S.L.U.T. shirt we sell.....simple design....good cause and people love the double meaning "message".....1 print on diff colour/sized shirts....and voila! ....Should I decide to take it seriously and launch it as my "clothing line"....it would do better than yours I think.....but my point is.....THINK IT THROUGH.....CHANGE YOUR LOGO.....and examine your Market.....MARKETING is what will sell your product.....read what Guadalupana wrote....
ON A POSITIVE NOTE: ...and speaking of Marketing....I'm sure many young Latinos and people around you will buy the products.....#1. to support.... #2. it's a young urban style thing....
If it's ALL about the money and non about your own image and style...then by all means keep doing your thing and producing these shirts.....you will sell "a few" to the flock around you....but that's about it.....
If I were you...I would consult people who have a clue about DESIGN....not to disrespect you, as you might be a designer....but get more feedback from designers....as you can see...the foro people would be considered CLIENTS and well...you heard what they said...LOL ...
Talk to Caliche for one....he might have brighter ideas.....
GOOD LUCK ANYHOW!!
And for the record....I"m NOT a hater.....everyone knows that!
Love the Wal-Mart line!!!!
Anyway, yeah, the shirt looks cheap, tacky and wanna-be gangsta-ish!!! That's all.
@ MJ - I can't believe people are still hating
I purchased the Pijama top yesterday for $6.60
You can't really beat that, and how many people do you expect to see you in your PJ's anyways.
I normally elaborate more on my comments....but I didn't have time last night....
@ TACO....have your friend John read this if he really cares about constructive criticism on his project.....it might help him.....
1. If it's a matter of "supporting" ...sure I would buy just ONE ITEM from his "clothing line".....but then I would wonder/wander if I really wanna encourage the production such "ugly" thing....(I'm sorry but I couldn't think of a better adjective)...because he might branch out and start making hats, skirts, jeans ...whatever! ...with that same logo....
2. I'm sure he has his reasons for that specific crown logo....something sentimental, gives him royalty power feelings lol...I don't know....I don't as much have an issue with the Picture of the Crown as I do with the font and size......(Keep the crown design, maybe make it smaller, it would look better even on female clothes....EX: a bikini with a small golden crown on the side...no font necessary.....a nice Baseball cap with a small gloden crown...etc..it can still be Urban but classy......and people will pay more!
3. The font and size of the "GOLDEN CROWNS" is really what is making this shirt TACKY! ....for one, it's not an original font...so right there you are not a creative designer....that's the same font Chicanos and other Rappers use for their tattoes, graffiti...etc....it's suits some, but not all.....
4. It really shows that no time or effort was made to design this shirt....to me it looks like you copied the font, copied the crown image, made golden stickers and pasted them on a regular White Long Sleeved shirt from Walmart.....If that's all it takes to launch a "clothing line".....I guarantee that anyone on here can make a nicer design/font/logo and be more original than that....
PERFECT EXAMPLE: The S.L.U.T. shirt we sell.....simple design....good cause and people love the double meaning "message".....1 print on diff colour/sized shirts....and voila! ....Should I decide to take it seriously and launch it as my "clothing line"....it would do better than yours I think.....but my point is.....THINK IT THROUGH.....CHANGE YOUR LOGO.....and examine your Market.....MARKETING is what will sell your product.....read what Guadalupana wrote....
ON A POSITIVE NOTE: ...and speaking of Marketing....I'm sure many young Latinos and people around you will buy the products.....#1. to support.... #2. it's a young urban style thing....
If it's ALL about the money and non about your own image and style...then by all means keep doing your thing and producing these shirts.....you will sell "a few" to the flock around you....but that's about it.....
If I were you...I would consult people who have a clue about DESIGN....not to disrespect you, as you might be a designer....but get more feedback from designers....as you can see...the foro people would be considered CLIENTS and well...you heard what they said...LOL ...
Talk to Caliche for one....he might have brighter ideas.....
GOOD LUCK ANYHOW!!
And for the record....I"m NOT a hater.....everyone knows that!
Love the Wal-Mart line!!!!
Anyway, yeah, the shirt looks cheap, tacky and wanna-be gangsta-ish!!! That's all.
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Knock people down at their own expense, they'll take it as a compliment!!!!
I also want to wish u all the best,. for the clothing line,.. (ahora me imagino a Guadalupana como la voz de mi conciencia :(). But take in consideration the tips given to u ,.
Do i know you?
Reveal yourself! heheheh,. I m Miel,,. the same old Miel,,.I have been around for a long time in this forum to know that You , Afrodita and Marilyn r causins,. and no, i haven't met u personally,.btw: I was ur advisor en club de los FEOS,. jejeejj
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I also want to wish u all the best,. for the clothing line,.. (ahora me imagino a Guadalupana como la voz de mi conciencia :(). But take in consideration the tips given to u ,.
Do i know you?
Reveal yourself!
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I normally elaborate more on my comments....but I didn't have time last night....
@ TACO....have your friend John read this if he really cares about constructive criticism on his project.....it might help him.....
1. If it's a matter of "supporting" ...sure I would buy just ONE ITEM from his "clothing line".....but then I would wonder/wander if I really wanna encourage the production such "ugly" thing....(I'm sorry but I couldn't think of a better adjective)...because he might branch out and start making hats, skirts, jeans ...whatever! ...with that same logo....
2. I'm sure he has his reasons for that specific crown logo....something sentimental, gives him royalty power feelings lol...I don't know....I don't as much have an issue with the Picture of the Crown as I do with the font and size......(Keep the crown design, maybe make it smaller, it would look better even on female clothes....EX: a bikini with a small golden crown on the side...no font necessary.....a nice Baseball cap with a small gloden crown...etc..it can still be Urban but classy......and people will pay more!
3. The font and size of the "GOLDEN CROWNS" is really what is making this shirt TACKY! ....for one, it's not an original font...so right there you are not a creative designer....that's the same font Chicanos and other Rappers use for their tattoes, graffiti...etc....it's suits some, but not all.....
4. It really shows that no time or effort was made to design this shirt....to me it looks like you copied the font, copied the crown image, made golden stickers and pasted them on a regular White Long Sleeved shirt from Walmart.....If that's all it takes to launch a "clothing line".....I guarantee that anyone on here can make a nicer design/font/logo and be more original than that....
PERFECT EXAMPLE: The S.L.U.T. shirt we sell.....simple design....good cause and people love the double meaning "message".....1 print on diff colour/sized shirts....and voila! ....Should I decide to take it seriously and launch it as my "clothing line"....it would do better than yours I think.....but my point is.....THINK IT THROUGH.....CHANGE YOUR LOGO.....and examine your Market.....MARKETING is what will sell your product.....read what Guadalupana wrote....
ON A POSITIVE NOTE: ...and speaking of Marketing....I'm sure many young Latinos and people around you will buy the products.....#1. to support.... #2. it's a young urban style thing....
If it's ALL about the money and non about your own image and style...then by all means keep doing your thing and producing these shirts.....you will sell "a few" to the flock around you....but that's about it.....
If I were you...I would consult people who have a clue about DESIGN....not to disrespect you, as you might be a designer....but get more feedback from designers....as you can see...the foro people would be considered CLIENTS and well...you heard what they said...LOL ...
Talk to Caliche for one....he might have brighter ideas.....
GOOD LUCK ANYHOW!!
And for the record....I"m NOT a hater.....everyone knows that!
info@latinnetworks.ca i believe their email is .........good luck w ur clothin line ...
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HIP HOP MEETS REGGAETON PART 7 @ AFTERLIFE - FRIDAY NOV.30TH
You know what bud? you should give people free food when the party is over. That would be awesome....not like a dinner or anything, but something cheap and filling.
Maybe hire one of the hotdog guys and buy a crapload of them, and have him distributing free hotdogs to people leaving the club....and you can cover the costs from cover and drug money.
DRUG MONEY??
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I normally elaborate more on my comments....but I didn't have time last night....
@ TACO....have your friend John read this if he really cares about constructive criticism on his project.....it might help him.....
1. If it's a matter of "supporting" ...sure I would buy just ONE ITEM from his "clothing line".....but then I would wonder/wander if I really wanna encourage the production such "ugly" thing....(I'm sorry but I couldn't think of a better adjective)...because he might branch out and start making hats, skirts, jeans ...whatever! ...with that same logo....
2. I'm sure he has his reasons for that specific crown logo....something sentimental, gives him royalty power feelings lol...I don't know....I don't as much have an issue with the Picture of the Crown as I do with the font and size......(Keep the crown design, maybe make it smaller, it would look better even on female clothes....EX: a bikini with a small golden crown on the side...no font necessary.....a nice Baseball cap with a small gloden crown...etc..it can still be Urban but classy......and people will pay more!
3. The font and size of the "GOLDEN CROWNS" is really what is making this shirt TACKY! ....for one, it's not an original font...so right there you are not a creative designer....that's the same font Chicanos and other Rappers use for their tattoes, graffiti...etc....it's suits some, but not all.....
4. It really shows that no time or effort was made to design this shirt....to me it looks like you copied the font, copied the crown image, made golden stickers and pasted them on a regular White Long Sleeved shirt from Walmart.....If that's all it takes to launch a "clothing line".....I guarantee that anyone on here can make a nicer design/font/logo and be more original than that....
PERFECT EXAMPLE: The S.L.U.T. shirt we sell.....simple design....good cause and people love the double meaning "message".....1 print on diff colour/sized shirts....and voila! ....Should I decide to take it seriously and launch it as my "clothing line"....it would do better than yours I think.....but my point is.....THINK IT THROUGH.....CHANGE YOUR LOGO.....and examine your Market.....MARKETING is what will sell your product.....read what Guadalupana wrote....
ON A POSITIVE NOTE: ...and speaking of Marketing....I'm sure many young Latinos and people around you will buy the products.....#1. to support.... #2. it's a young urban style thing....
If it's ALL about the money and non about your own image and style...then by all means keep doing your thing and producing these shirts.....you will sell "a few" to the flock around you....but that's about it.....
If I were you...I would consult people who have a clue about DESIGN....not to disrespect you, as you might be a designer....but get more feedback from designers....as you can see...the foro people would be considered CLIENTS and well...you heard what they said...LOL ...
Talk to Caliche for one....he might have brighter ideas.....
GOOD LUCK ANYHOW!!
And for the record....I"m NOT a hater.....everyone knows that!
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"To be a good Promoter you must have the heart of a Gambler and the mind of a Computer"
FREE TACOS BEFORE 11:30PM ON GLIST..........hahahaa
You know what bud? you should give people free food when the party is over. That would be awesome....not like a dinner or anything, but something cheap and filling.
Maybe hire one of the hotdog guys and buy a crapload of them, and have him distributing free hotdogs to people leaving the club....and you can cover the costs from cover and drug money.
Oh, and I don't like the shirts either. I would if it said Buffy Rules the World in Black shiny letters and the shirt was sleeveless and pink. And if had ruffles. And even then I wouldn't buy it.
I also want to wish u all the best,. for the clothing line,.. (ahora me imagino a Guadalupana como la voz de mi conciencia :(). But take in consideration the tips given to u ,.
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DON CHELO wrote: U MUST PAY IN RUPEES(INDIA'S CURRENCY)
YOU THINK I'M MADE OF RUPEES?!
I also would like to point out that I am paying for NOTHING! NOTHING I SAY! Jaime Cruz outbid me fair and square. Jaime, pay the man! I don't remember co-signing for your ownership. Why are collection hounds asking me! BAAAH!
JC, that will be 260.123 Indian Rupees... he would like them in small unmarked bills.
Excellent!
Don Chelo that can buy you or Taco 5 Taco Bell tacos and a drink
YES, IM LOOKING FORWARD TO TACO BELL COMPLIMENTS OF MR. AKA TAKO. I KNEW I DID A GOOD BUSINESS WHEN I TOOK DA JOB OF SALES MANAGER FOR THE NEW CLOTHES LINE. NOW PAY ME MY RUPEES!!!
DON CHELO wrote: U MUST PAY IN RUPEES(INDIA'S CURRENCY)
YOU THINK I'M MADE OF RUPEES?!
I also would like to point out that I am paying for NOTHING! NOTHING I SAY! Jaime Cruz outbid me fair and square. Jaime, pay the man! I don't remember co-signing for your ownership. Why are collection hounds asking me! BAAAH!
JC, that will be 260.123 Indian Rupees... he would like them in small unmarked bills.
Excellent!
Don Chelo that can buy you or Taco 5 Taco Bell tacos and a drink
regardless of my opinion on the design and the lettering, let me say that JUST by making it all half as big -the design and the lettering, that is- would, somehow, help. Ok, make it three times as small.
Just my 2 cents.
And drop the gold inking. Brown, red-brown will do.
DITTO! I feel like such a schmuck after reading this...
Good Luck, Taco!
I don't quite feel like a shmuck - while the truth is not many of us are liking the shirt, the jokes are done in good spirits (auctining shirt joking part)...
I still do wish Taco GOOD LUCK and like Guada said - a lil harder work will help.
Cheers.
Now send us some free samples!
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DON CHELO wrote: U MUST PAY IN RUPEES(INDIA'S CURRENCY)
YOU THINK I'M MADE OF RUPEES?!
I also would like to point out that I am paying for NOTHING! NOTHING I SAY! Jaime Cruz outbid me fair and square. Jaime, pay the man! I don't remember co-signing for your ownership. Why are collection hounds asking me! BAAAH!
JC, that will be 260.123 Indian Rupees... he would like them in small unmarked bills.
Sure it may not appeal to the audience right now, but if you're really serious about your business, i'd suggest you invest time to show your product in the best light.
Just my opinion. Good luck.
DITTO! I feel like such a schmuck after reading this...
angelita wrote: Ok, i start my bid at $2.20 (i didn't buy timmy's today)
u've already been outbid... as have I
@ Jaime, pls pay $6.55 to DC so he can go buy a Taco.. or pay for a Taco.. or give a Taco... whatever the case may be.. you are the lucky new owner of a pajama shirt!
Kudos to you for trying to make a living, but a few tips for you in marketing:
1. Better shots would help you product. Specially lifestyle shots.
2. Provide more information on the actual product. Such as material, washing instructions and so on.
3. Provide different angles of the product, or even the actual product being used.
Sure it may not appeal to the audience right now, but if you're really serious about your business, i'd suggest you invest time to show your product in the best light.
Just my opinion. Good luck.
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angelita wrote: Ok, i start my bid at $2.20 (i didn't buy timmy's today)
u've already been outbid... as have I
@ Jaime, pls pay $6.55 to DC so he can go buy a Taco.. or pay for a Taco.. or give a Taco... whatever the case may be.. you are the lucky new owner of a pajama shirt!
DON CHELO wrote: WTF??? I CAN'T SEE NO PIC... I WANT TO HATE TOO. NO! NO HATING FOR YOU! LET ME SEE DA ONE T-SHIRT COLLECTION. MAYBE WE CAN START AN AUCTION WITH IT. WHO PAYS 7 DOLLARS???? DO I HEAR 7.50???
$6.50
JUST TO REMIND U, IN AN AUCTION DA PRICE GOES UP. BIDDING MUST BE INCREASE NOT DECREASE...ANYWAYS, U WIN. NOW GIVE ME MY 6.50 SO I CAN PAY TACO HIS 1.50 CUT.
DON CHELO wrote: WTF??? I CAN'T SEE NO PIC... I WANT TO HATE TOO. LET ME SEE DA ONE T-SHIRT COLLECTION. MAYBE WE CAN START AN AUCTION WITH IT. WHO PAYS 7 DOLLARS???? DO I HEAR 7.50???
LOL Don't worry, it's says UNITED CROWNS LATINO and there's a crown that looks like the one on the Crown Royal bottle in the middle of the shirt. The letters are in gold. I don't like it and i still won't even if it's taken in a different shot.
Ok, i start my bid at $2.20 (i didn't buy timmy's today)
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DON CHELO wrote: WTF??? I CAN'T SEE NO PIC... I WANT TO HATE TOO. LET ME SEE DA ONE T-SHIRT COLLECTION. MAYBE WE CAN START AN AUCTION WITH IT. WHO PAYS 7 DOLLARS???? DO I HEAR 7.50???
That's ok man, you can go ahead and hate regardless.
DON CHELO wrote: WTF??? I CAN'T SEE NO PIC... I WANT TO HATE TOO. NO! NO HATING FOR YOU! LET ME SEE DA ONE T-SHIRT COLLECTION. MAYBE WE CAN START AN AUCTION WITH IT. WHO PAYS 7 DOLLARS???? DO I HEAR 7.50???
DON CHELO wrote: WTF??? I CAN'T SEE NO PIC... I WANT TO HATE TOO. NO! NO HATING FOR YOU! LET ME SEE DA ONE T-SHIRT COLLECTION. MAYBE WE CAN START AN AUCTION WITH IT. WHO PAYS 7 DOLLARS???? DO I HEAR 7.50???
DON CHELO wrote: WTF??? I CAN'T SEE NO PIC... I WANT TO HATE TOO. LET ME SEE DA ONE T-SHIRT COLLECTION. MAYBE WE CAN START AN AUCTION WITH IT. WHO PAYS 7 DOLLARS???? DO I HEAR 7.50???
Is shipping included - or will shipping cost more than the shirt?
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WTF??? I CAN'T SEE NO PIC... I WANT TO HATE TOO. LET ME SEE DA ONE T-SHIRT COLLECTION. MAYBE WE CAN START AN AUCTION WITH IT. WHO PAYS 7 DOLLARS???? DO I HEAR 7.50???
I don't like it either, mostly because of the design. The gold letter are been used a lot on t-shirts ("urban style"),.. but the united crowns?? what is referring to?? the Latin Kings (the gang)????
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does ONE shirt make a "collection" or is there more?
I also am not feeling the design and golden logo on white... I also think you could have taken a better picture... Maybe you should have hired God to do a Photo shooT!
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