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McOSIRIS wrote:


Exactly what I told Boris!!!



Yeah, never trust a man named Boris.

Anyway, glad u see the necessary fixes as well.

Good luck


Now fakk off!!

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Ok, I finally saw it. First let me congratulate you MC! Great concept, great that you got it completed. Now for my constructive The first thing I noticed was the audio. Not sure if you can do more post work but I think you might want to redub the audio. The echo drowns out the times the man is speaking softly. The biggest thing I noticed was that this was basically a monologue but there were no shots from the 'filming camera's point of view (the one he was speaking to). I feel it would give it a more dramatic effect. In fact the actual murder should be from that perspective but not shown to the audience. (show the wall or floor and only hear the screams of terror). There were a few edits that could have been tighter, like the pan from the other man to the woman... there was a big shot of the floor for a long time. Not sure if you have these angles but a few exteme close-ups would have made it more intense as well. Ok, that's my brutually honest answer. I hope you dont get offended, I'm only offering my non-professional opinion.


Exactly what I told Boris!!!


I questioned him about the sound, the pan,but the "off close up" was my idea.... I wanted to hide the actual murder, but ppl still can "peek" thru the small camera's viewfinder....


thanx for you comments and of course I don't get offended, I'm aware of all those details and hopefuly they're eliminated in the final cut....as well as some other shots that should be included and they didn't make the cut...


 


once again, thanx and....


 


 


 


 


 


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Ok, I finally saw it. First let me congratulate you MC! Great concept, great that you got it completed.

Now for my constructive

The first thing I noticed was the audio. Not sure if you can do more post work but I think you might want to redub the audio. The echo drowns out the times the man is speaking softly.

The biggest thing I noticed was that this was basically a monologue but there were no shots from the 'filming camera's point of view (the one he was speaking to). I feel it would give it a more dramatic effect. In fact the actual murder should be from that perspective but not shown to the audience. (show the wall or floor and only hear the screams of terror).

There were a few edits that could have been tighter, like the pan from the other man to the woman... there was a big shot of the floor for a long time.

Not sure if you have these angles but a few exteme close-ups would have made it more intense as well.

Ok, that's my brutually honest answer. I hope you dont get offended, I'm only offering my non-professional opinion.



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Shei wrote:

Hey McOscar..! me encantó!!!!!! al fin lo pude ver!!! super archi felicitaciones! esta super!.. y como te dije... no dejes de saludar cuando ganes el Oscar..   Congrats!!!!!!

Gracias!!!!!


no estoy seguro todavia, pero parece que en la proxima voy a actuar yo....


 



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Hey McOscar..!


me encantó!!!!!! al fin lo pude ver!!!


super archi felicitaciones! esta super!.. y como te dije... no dejes de saludar cuando ganes el Oscar..


 


Congrats!!!!!!



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@ Mastropiero & X :   gentlemen,  your comments are very valuable.... thank you very much


 


@ Daeveed and Mimi :  watch it and let me know wot ya think...



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good job McOSIRIS i really like the idea, it reminded me of one of the episodes from the Twilight Zone......one thing tho the guys at the end didn't really give me that feel of war more like just some regular guys breaking into someones house.......I just thinks it needs something to give it that feel that they are at war/POW.

Over all a gr8 job, really liked it.


keep up the good work


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Mastropiero wrote:

(It kinds of remind me of  “Tesis”)

Awesome movie.


MC. I'll watch it when i get home.



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I haven't seen it yet which is why I haven't posted.



But I thought I would make a presence in this thread anyway.

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Good mockumentary, the blend of drama,sarcasm and reality was well done,  it give you something to think about, Great job!!! (It kinds of remind me of  “Tesis”)



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McOSIRIS wrote:

: @ Salty Cracker: I hope you can watch it from home...

I saw it!!!!!


Wow, you kept me watching to the end ... GOD JOB!!


But his head got chopped off



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Hugo wrote:

Esta super buena!! Me gusto las demas personas a ser ejecutadas no me convencieron mucho pero la idea esta genial! I know how much this means to you, huge first step, congrats y la mejor de las suertes en tus futuras producciones!

weon!!!!   te ganaste un spring roll... gracias por los buenos deseos....


@ Bistor: I appreciate the attention for the little details...let's hope the final cut goes flawless...


@ Salty Cracker: I hope you can watch it from home...


@ for all of you who've seen and haven't posted:       FA-CUE.....


 



-- Edited by McOSIRIS at 18:22, 2006-07-09

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Esta super buena!!


Me gusto las demas personas a ser ejecutadas no me convencieron mucho pero la idea esta genial!


I know how much this means to you, huge first step, congrats y la mejor de las suertes en tus futuras producciones!



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I don't see your 5 minutes of fame


I hate MY WORK COMPUTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



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Interesting!

I like the idea (or what I interpret as the idea): the vulgarization of death, the passing of human life as a mere media event.

I like the excellent detail of putting a hijab on the female actress. Very realistic.

Downside, I would say the main actor's monologue could convey more emotion, or perhaps "coldness". A more newsanchor-like, detached, clinical feel to what he says.

Also, I think you cut out a "f@ck" from the other male actor, when he says "shut up". It's noticeable.

At any rate, interesting!

-- Edited by bistor at 00:11, 2006-07-08

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Ladies and Gentlemen:


 


Allow me to present to you my first co-production called 5 MINUTES.


This is not the final cut, but I wanted to do a little internet screening so I can get some feedbacks for the final cut and the official release.


Adjust the volume of your speakers (the audio is a little low), grab your popcorn and your Kleenex…Sit back and enjoy….


 


 


 


 


But before,


 


Let me paint a little scenario for you….


You are away from home and you’re about to be executed….You’ve been given 5 minutes to say your last words on camera….


 


 


 


What would you say????



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